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Old 10-02-05, 12:49 PM   #22
Dervla
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Decent Lil drop you haver here prez...Nice muli' with flow and the best aspect in your verse was the wordplays..very creative with words..Nice..I don't care about structure so I won't crit you on that...But keep on writing Nice lil decent drop with good flow and Wordplays..
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