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Old 10-02-05, 02:05 PM   #6
Dervla
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Alchemy-
Pretty basic, I wasn't feeling it...Good flow overall, the only best aspect in your verse was the "Imaginary'...the approach is what I wasn't feeling could've been better...But overall Good drop on your part.

Illus'Artis- This is my fav part in this collab..Nice approach and creative by using the site as your concept...Very Nice and creative.

Paranoid- The 2nd best in this collab, Nice emotion and imaginary..Your approach was good too, Keep writing and dropping.


Overall- This was a Nice lil collab...My fav 2 writers in this collab was ILLus'Artis and paranoid...Both had a very good creative approach and Nice Emotion in both of there verses. Alchemy I felted that you was the weakest link in this collab wasn't Much good to say about your verse because it was basically basic and not creative, but overall good collab..

Peace, leave feed on my newest OM "Your Time is Up"...
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