love the sample on the beat....

the first guy needs to work on the presence n delivery definitely.....

his flow is decent...but still could use some touching up.....seems like he tries to rush his words in some points....lyrically...its ok.....


the background ad libs are ok...i dont think they add a whole lot to the track though...

2nd dude....presence is better.....but still could use some work...

flow could def use some work....u pause a couple times to let the beat catch up.....cant really understand what your saying....flow gets off at the end also....

quality isnt too great...


overall the beat was coo.....its was an ok track...both of you need to work on a couple certain things and youll be straight...just keep elevating...

PLEASE return the favor....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210373

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