beat is goodchris lacks emotion, flow is ok but drifts off too often, adlibs sounds really fucked up, lyrics are average... ur vocals sound fucked, u sure its in a studio??? deliver n emotion still lacks... flow sounds rushed at time, lyrics are average again.

doesnt sound studio quality at all tbh... i have far from studio set-up and get better quality, so if this is studio, they need a whole new set-up.

track is ok i guess, but as i keep sayin u need to improve ur emotion, n build confidence on the mic e.t.c/// keep at it tho