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Old 10-02-05, 02:45 PM   #10
Daubs
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This was feedback posted for Kamze

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I told this bitch that his rhymes were outdated, and played/
So he ran home in a hurry, and tried to renew them the next day/
0 wins on ya rec, that the most you ever gonna get, up here in rap verse/
Cuz i'll leave you with abselutly nothin, like a poor woman's pusre/
You ain't gona win this battle, i'm just to high above in my game/
Cuz you always 'underscore' in your battles,.....just like in yo name/


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u gonna fukin die after i drop this verse
i suggest u look through ur pre writtens and reharse



Kamze came hearder, i wont vote cos your both mates, but kamze defo got this/
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