IP:
Ok.....coo beat...
lyrically this is coo...you came in with some nice lines right out the gate......flow is good....it could use some small touch up...not a big deal though....
delivery is pretty good....and your presence as well
im feelin the ad libs in the hook....
dont get me wrong...it IS a good track...but it feels like it needs something else...like some kinda extra push...im not sure....
but good post though....better than a lot of cats here...good work
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