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Old 10-02-05, 02:46 PM   #5
.Ike.
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Ok.....coo beat...

lyrically this is coo...you came in with some nice lines right out the gate......flow is good....it could use some small touch up...not a big deal though....

delivery is pretty good....and your presence as well

im feelin the ad libs in the hook....

dont get me wrong...it IS a good track...but it feels like it needs something else...like some kinda extra push...im not sure....

but good post though....better than a lot of cats here...good work
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