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Old 10-02-05, 02:50 PM   #7
Triple_N
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yea son...first thing flow wise you came thru on this...good shit...only thing I would say is you held same flow too long.......hook was koo....the addlibs brought it out made it catchy...delivery was good......lyrics was ah'ight u had sum spots were u said sum witty shit....rhyme scheme was nice..u held those multies while still making sense...good shit......def something worth bumping..jus minor lil things but it was still tight....stay up..........1


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