I liked the intro, the beat's the first Lil John clone type beat I've 'felt' in AGES.

You GOTTA turn your vocals down like 3-5dB. The hook's catchy enough. The mic sounds muffled, but the vocals them selves are clear and consise with a pretty much dead-on flow. The hook sounds like lil wayne. Seems like a cocktease to a pretty damn good track, but I qouldn't do it solo, if I were you. Put 3 different emcees on there and really get the variety going on the track so it stays fresh, cuz that beat is somewhat redundant. I liked it. I'd listen to it if it came on the radio instead of most of the Lil John generics, that's for sure. It's essentially the same thing, just with more intellect so I don't feel like I'm listening to some rhymes that's 1 step above baby talk. Word to that. 1

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