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Originally Posted by Mystic Chaoscreativity[B
never seen it before, so it was original to me........[/B]
multiswasn't too impressed in this department, but it was good from a rap standpoint......
vocabokay...... i think sometimes people use overly over-the-top voc. and it distracts the reader..... u might wanna work on that....
structure/flowgood structure after u fixed it....... mostly good flow, but i had a hard time catching it......
Conceptsorta played topic, but i never get tired of seeing new twists on it.....
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