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Old 10-02-05, 04:02 PM   #19
Shazz
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yo yo yoimbatman-
You kept asking questions blah blah yea yea....Very very basicNot many punches just statements not much wordplay, you need alot more of flow.. I don't see any that even make sense.... overall it was kinda poor...........

Big_O-
Mmmm...The way you wrote it was like for audio...I dunno if you write it or not i dunno. The flow was alright...Now the wordplay with the flow of the sentence, didn't really make sense or didn't care too much for it. Overall you did ok against him.. nothin i would dig...
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