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Old 10-02-05, 05:13 PM   #14
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Voted For: wyteknyte

tha notorious d-overall man, your verse wasnt that dope..your structure needs upping....and your vocab and multis were soft and weak....you dissed his hometown...thats played and weak..you need a better concept for that...overall ur verse was weak and played...4/10

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wyteknyte-your verse was good, i liked how you proved your point with the links and you incorporated good personals...your punches were soft, but still present in the battle...your multis were absent and your vocab wasnt so great..your last 2 lines was mad funny, cuz his structure is just like that so thats a good personal...overall 6/10