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Old 10-02-05, 05:27 PM   #23
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Voted For: Black Arts

Your not even on my level for me to battling black arts
He talkin to me on aim…. like he new to this rap game
3....didn't rhyme...and how is talking to you on AIM making him "new" to the rap game?
If this was audio….ya would mumble like Mike Jones
Like you right now you in strees… just a bunch of moans
3....weak.....
Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously
Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously
2....what are talking about him repeating for?

I'm here to break your flow, i'm coming ready or not like fugees
Like the rapist on the wing this nigga only fucks with newbies*
4...ok...at least it's an attempt of a personal
Foo please couldn't be wanker if your flow rubbed in your man's hand
I'm making tits like you hit floor like Pamela doing a handstand
4....kinda played...
I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please
Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz**
5...in the 1st line..the "shawn" part came outta no where....but the punch was nice,

Ok...One-sided
I am being brutaly honest here,Shazz.
ur verse was horrible.ANd I don't care about that 6 mins. excuse.U had mad time to make ur verse...so why would you spend just 6 minutes on it?Don't make excuses son.
As for ur punches....weak.That 1st bar...why is talking to someone on AIM mean they "new" to the rap game?I don't see any reason it would mean that.And that last bar...why would u say he repeats?Cos if he spits 2 bars that are different from each other..then you automatically look stupid as he didn't repeat himself.And that's borderline fake personal.Think ya bars through and make sure they make sence next time.

Vote-Black Arts
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