beautiful structure........ nice vocab made better bcuz u didn't overcomplicate it........

for what awaits
around the cornered gates
the lord of death
ready to take you away
^my favorite part........

not the first time i've seen this topic, but i like the way u did it........ overall 8.5/10.....keep em comin.............

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