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Old 10-02-05, 07:53 PM   #5
Dervla
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Alright this was a good drop..I liked the flow and you got some spelling/grammars errors. Don't try to say "Niggas" too many times especially in one bar...that just killst he flow. I liked your approach, it was very basic could've creative. Overall Good verse here, keep writing...PEACE.
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