Like my ex-wife...hahaha..no.

Anyway, the concept was okay, as were the structure and flow. Your vocabulary could use work as well. Yes, this was poetry, but you probably posted here because about any rap site you go to OM gets more feed on it then Poetry. The whole thing was mediocre. Keep elevating. 7/10


RTF on Dead Beat Holiday(which is really entitled Pharaoh's Sarcophagus, I just made a mistake.)

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