Vocabulary: Okay
Flow: Good
Structure: Okay
Concept: Decent
Topic: Decent
Favorite Lines:
Ayo you start a new school, theirs always that kid who's ignorant
They wanna take it out on you coz of what their parents did to them

Rating: 7/10
Advice: Some lines didn't even rhyme. The topic was decent. You misspelled a shit load of things, which is something that annoys me when it happens on purpose because it makes the best piece seem lazy as fuck. The vocabulary was decent, nothing astounding there. Just keep elevating.

RTF on Dead Beat Holiday(which is really entitled Pharaoh's Sarcophagus, I just made a mistake.)

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