Vocabulary: Still nothing amazing, can be worked on.
Flow: Okay, that hatchet line didn't seem all that good on the flow side to me...
Structure: Okay. The hatchet line stretched it out.
Concept: Same as all your other things.
Topic: Same as all your other things.
Favorite Lines: None quotable.
Rating: 6/10
Advice: Find an original topic, or if you continue pursuing self-glorification but you need to be original, because all you seem to me is another wannabe generic rapper with no wordplay who relies on his friends with four posts to come in here and say 'it's dope' when leaving no legitimate feed. Find some originality.

Remember to RTF on Dead Beat Holiday.

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