mystic-your verse was well structure, it flowed well...i feel your imagery was shy...but ur emotion and storyline creativness made up for it.....your vocab wasnt the best....but it was still a nice gentle piece to read...i feel you had good creativenness...overall 7/10
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chip-your verse was short and hard to flow to, you need to fix your structure and make it flow better...ur vocab was good...and creativeness...though it was hard to clue pieces together..overall 6/10

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