Chip-Your verse was short but sweet, i feel you used a good variety of vocab....it enhanced your verse.Problem with your verse is that its structured poorly...this is a problem, becuz now i can not get a good flow outa your verse.your concept to the topic was pretty good and meaning was well...overall 5/10

Mystic Chaos-Your verse was actually good. I feel like your structure was onpoint almost everyline. And the flow was tight.Your vocab could be upped a lot but your emotion deff. made up for that man. Your imagery was ok but you should up on that...your storyline kept me reading...overall 7/10

v/mystic chaos

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