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Old 10-02-05, 09:37 PM   #15
chip
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^that's a little better.......... but it's fucked up if the only thing y'all had against my piece iz that it wasn't centered on the screen.......... and i was within the bar limits, so my shit wasn't short......... imagine my shit iz centered, and then check the flow....... i know it's perfect, cuz i spit it to myself twice before i posted it......
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