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Old 10-02-05, 11:04 PM   #71
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Voted For: flow verse



Like a football linebacker no matter how much he works out he can’t be defined
So don’t worry about elevation this win is already mine

He thinks he’s funny? . . . yea like jokers in a deck of cards . . .just throw them out
He can’t spit unless you mean the cum dripping out his mouth

Bitch has to “recycle” his lines. . . cause the ‘trash pickers” don’t want his “garbage”
Lacks creativity cause he gives his head but receives no knowledge

To him “Pun” was just a rapper . . . which explains why he doesn’t get “wordplay”
Bitch couldn’t drop decent “bar” if he spit from “Pelican Bay”

definately gave this a 9/10 good punches....i liked ur flow structure too.....

recross to the mosh im untouchable like randy 'moss'
........rewind this verse so ull eazily get to ur 100th 'loss'
be ready to forfiet ur prize undisputed rhymes disguise my 'size'
........realize ur 'deadwieght' like a turtle turtle in 'Master of Disguise'*
prepare for this to be ur final battle beware 'flow verse'
........u couldnt spit 'Loud' and 'Clear' if u were a 'Crow Sperse'**
distorted to rubble destroy u like a 'Finger' to a 'Bubble'
........commense to a pray cuz uve been retorted to a 'Struggle'

i gave this a 6/10 really didnt feel ur flow structure or ur punches....

i give this to flow verse ayo RTF

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