I liek the beat alright. Something about it seems liek its' missing. Listening through some Audio Technica ATH-M40fs studio monitor headphones.

First verse: hmmm.. dunno what else to say but "dope" son. Shit's dead on and I LOVED the tempo switch. Def hot al lthe way through.

Hook: Hated it. Seems REAL simple. Like..TOO simple.


Second verse: hot, but I tihnk it shoulda switched up some sorta liek the first one did. This one seems a lil less 'alive' than the first one did. Also, I can hear you run completely outta breath by the end of the verse.

Oh yeah, the beat needs some EQing on the high and lows only to bring it out. the tones melt together way too much. Oh yeah, your echo duration was too long on the adlib at the end IMO.

Uno.

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