Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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damn good peice id like it to be longer but well this site is fullof lazy ppl lol
but overall i thought it was good you have good flow and structure
i liked the quote that sealed it for me nice toucvh to it
i like the imagery drebris flying everywhere hinges being busted kids bumping into each other and the news reporter pice was good props atty
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