Voted For: chip

Chip-Well...a short,but nice peice nevertheless.Followed the topic well.Was one of those "topic right in our faces" ones...which is ok to do.I thought your flow was one of the best things ya had going.Stayed consistant throughout the whole thing.My opinion...ya should have made it longer...ya know...make it more desciptive 'n watnot so it'll stick to our heads.But then again...you didn't have any filler or nothing.Every line seemed to have relevance to the topic 'n shit.Props.Ur shit was original,and had more of a "song" feel to it as opposed to a "textie topical"..which is rare..so good job on that..But that part about tarzan 'n jungle wasn't good IMO.I wuzn't feeling that part.

Mystic Chaos-Well...first off,ur peice was too cliche...the "tradegy" thing in topicals is quickly getting boring as we all see it coming.As soon as the read the line about "warrant for my arrest"....I automatically knew you had a tradegy peice right there.Make ur shit more creative.And also....I don't see what relevance the part about his childhood had on the story as a whole.So I guess that was filler.As opposed to Chip..your shit had a more "textie topical" feel to it as opposed to a "song" feel...if ya know what I mean?And filler is a no-no. Best thing you had,like Chip,was flow...ur flow has obviously improved a lot.Keep it up.

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