IMO, It was alright, I mean, it was very well written, but I think the message wasn't presented clrearly, nor the concept of the poem. It could have been more decriptive, but then again, imagery wasn't a big deal for this poem, but I also felt it lacked emotion. You had a good use of vocab, you didn't just have a nice vocab you also it proparly. The metaphors/similies were good. Nice oxymoran you used in there also Anyways, that's what were the pro's and cons of the poem, I didn't think it was AMAZING, but it was good nevertheless. So uh, ya.

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