Voted For: flow verse

flow verse-
I liked the wordplay flow was really really really basic....The punches were not really that great but ok the stucture was terrible maybe you could fix that again.... overall you did good enough to beat him.

ThA NoToRiOuS D-
Maybe i should be voting cause i didn't really understand alot of parts of it...Like the punches weren't that all too me...They sounded like threats not really nothin speical.. Wordplay was ok, your flow was like very basic too..Try makin it more real. no hate

v/flowverse

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