Voted For: Mystic Chaos



mystic chaos-your verse was well structure, i feel that ur flow was your best feature...in this you had pretty good emotion..i think you expressed ur emotion throughout ur verse and made an impact on the reader..ur imagery is not quite the best but u still described your piece well....i think you had a poor storyline and that it could have been produced better....but overall i feel you had a pretty good drop overall 7/10

chip-your verse was dope...you had good vocab..good flow....probally your best feature...problems with this piece was line limit...if you expanded your piece and made it worth the while u woulda got the vote...but in not doing so..you didnt reach the readers climax of enjoyment...so overall...id say you had a pretty original and decent drop overall 6.5/10

v/mystic chaos

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