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Old 10-04-05, 01:34 AM   #28
Detrimental
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

You won in every category, your flow was sick with great word play....your punches were funny as hell, very original

Other dude...stretched lines sound horrible unless you're doing an acapella....well it depends on your rhyme scheme and you don't have the one to do it....you need to work on your punch lines, learn how to use word play cuz i didn't see any....you're a decent battler...you sound more rookie tho, work on it...

ColdSTEEL hit me up for a battle sometime, PM me, do it soon cuz i aint on this site much anymore
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