Listenign through some pro studio monitor headphones.

VBeat is kinda boring and sounds incomplete. It's missing the melody. Strange.

The first verse is okay lyrically, but I don't buy a single bit of it. that gun shit and all that man, you'd never do it, so why evne say it? Just me though, some people love that shit. Your hook is lumpy in this. Woulda beenfitted in some more seperation between the bars because it soudns almost like a run-on sentence. Your vocie also is kinda liek carson. By "kinda" I mean "exactly" but with like 2 extra pubes worth of bass.

The second verse is exacytly liek the first (if it even breaks) and what I thought was a hook was just an adlib that lead right back into the verse agian. The main thing that distraced me form this track is the flow. Especially considering the lines sounded run-on (listen to it, there's only about 4-5 full stops for the entire track). The beat was mild as hell too and definitely not something you'd use for a diss. I'm not sure what exactly you'd use a beat liek htat for, considering that it's stil not "really" complete seeing as the melods is either missing, or just flat-out placid. Honest feedback as it always has been and always will be.


-Ape.

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