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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
Big O-
You were mostly doin like putting a couple words and rhymeing with it- not that big of a challange, I know you can be doper when you want to be. Make your structure better...Your wodplay better ... Almost everything better? No beef but just fix those things and youll have a better verse.
Tha 1 An Onlii B -
Your one line that streteched out was like kinda werid...Just one streched line...but ya I like the flow to .It was good but wtf is telekenichoadthoawt? Some of that stuff don't make sense... But it more than Big O and was more advance then his. I like the explanation it was kinda hard to understand but you had all the wordplay flow etc to win it.
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