*listening*
beat's nice.... delivery is aight, i would say put more emotion into it. lyrics and word choice is pretty decent. some forced multis... but most of them were coo. the quality isn't up to snuff but it's still legit in my opinion. liked the ending, good shit man keep it up. you got potential
return the favor man.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210622