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Old 10-05-05, 05:11 PM   #47
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fake rappers get on the net,they tend to foget about life behind them
fag forgot he tryna come up on my site, so let me remind him.
nice opener...5/10


in registration you should of never agreed to the terms and conditions
Not one Rv crew wants you, I guess you've learned your position
Haha good punch 7/10
2000 post in a month, this is the result of no life rejections
you need this "flow to "surivive" like introvenous injections
another good punch nice similie 7/10
naturally killing shit,cause your post makes us all laugh to death
never survive as long as me, like you halfed your breath
okay punch...6/10
your broke, like fogetting "flour" while baking you wont get your "cake up"
you more like dry sex............you simply a fake fuck.
haha funny punch...8/10
this battle remains one sided, like I cut you in half
Each one of your lines dont hit,like a punch in the dark
meh...decent coulda been better 4/10
My aproach is perfect position like a snipers roof
battle me? you bit of more than you can chew,like he hyped is tooth
haha good punch 7/10
you couldnt tie a punch together if you gums were rope
grabbing "faiths" ass, relising to win you need tons of "hope"
haha nice punch 8/10
nigkah dont get me started i read ya verses ,pure boredom
so im'a make you fuckin disapear like the casino forum
haha good punch 6/10
*raises fist*

"finish him'

This Pathetic Emcee gets Ripped Conclusively, Incisions Seriously Injures this Opponents Nutrients,
The same Phonetic Ego Ravaged, Continuing Investigation Sees Illness Obliterating his Nucleus’
dag tons of vocab...kinda made the flow off...decent tho 5/10

okay you came harder with punches and your flow was on point cept the last bar......didnt have any real personals....so that kinda sucks...lol.....but you had aiight vocab not too much cept the last bar again.....but you had a similie or two which helped you out...overall 63/100

nat-
your drop was too long to crit like y's but yeah ima do a good explanation...

aiight you had some pretty good punches.....but some lacked cuz of flow and just didnt hit that hard....your flow was off at a couple points whish hurt you as well.....your personals lacked as well...they didnt really hit that hard.....but props for attmpting.....also you had some vocab but for how long ur drop was it coulda used a lil more that what you had.....but props for adding some period......also your structure wasnt the greatest.....but thats no biggie to me.......but work on it some....some punches seemed forced also which is what hurt you and because they seemed forced tit hurt the flow.....so try not to force punches......but i say some decent wordplay in there which was nice but overall if i would rate it out of a 100 like ys i'd say it would be close but just not quite there cuz he had more landed and herder punches overall...so i'd give it a 57/100

but nice battle for the both.......
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