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Old 10-05-05, 05:59 PM   #16
Kawn Flixx
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Damn mami this was a great drop i was really feeling it , sorry i couldnt leave feedback on this earlier alittle lazy..but damn nice emotions and imagery it was very vivid , liked how you broke it down from baby all the way to the death..nice wordplay and vocab...Overall lola nice drop..it could have beena little better but it was good keep it up
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