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Old 10-05-05, 09:56 PM   #18
InfiniteStan
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

vote for yo yo yoimbat....

u got my vote cuz your verse was better in personal punches. but your vocab is simple . so just elevate on that and keep your structure straight.cuz its loppy ass fuck just like the other cat..keep your shit straight .. u got my vote though just because of the personal punches! and other cat didnt have nothing!

That one and...* you need to elevate on your vocab and u need to keep your structure straight because its real loppy and u gotta stop self glorification and start making them punches!! no hate just work on ur verses !!
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