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Voted For: 1ndeph
1ndeph verse
I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win.
so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent.
^ rhyme is off...punch aight but rhyme harmed the bar
you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em.
damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album.
^ ok bar reminded me of couldn't sell 2 copies if you pressed a double album bar by Em...nice flip
You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics.
^ ok diss personal there
king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes.
Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme.
^ lol felt that good diss
You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope.
You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero.
^ na not feelin this rhyme again was weak
slang these days,the only way your skills benifit.
cause to you bad and good must be a synonym
^ ok closer ok diss
one love
^ lol
Overall
Ok verse 1 or 2 bars wasn't really feelin the bars that didn't rhyme in my opinion woulda worked better in audio but text...na...some aight disses lol @ the midwest bar...ok verse...
T.r.oo.P verse
Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis
If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness
^ ok opener on Nuns lol
Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It
CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation
^ na not feelin it again rhyme was pssh
Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless
Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks
^ basicks? i know it says basics...jus type that i hate the slang bar was aight though
Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless
Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest
^ meh ok diss...coulda been better though
Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On
Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On
^ good bar diss there lol @ narcoleptics
I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth
Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self
^ closer ok...not amazing though
Overall
1 bar stood out for me to be honest that was the narcoleptics everything else was jus average @ best...creativness wasn't really there...i think the nuns bar was aight but we all know bout thong punches though nowadays...avy personal was there...lose the slang as well..if thats how you write when you spittin...fine but text you gotta be considerate...
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-1ndeph-
More consistant despite the weak rhymes in a few bars...lose that for ya next text battle...RTF in my sig vs EC (audio battle A.I vs L.L)
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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