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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Voted For: One Man Band
Mhmm... See I recon you both needed to cram in more multis in this.. Natural killa, when writing for a multi battle switching up multis inbetween lines is a bad move, cause you'll be working one rhyme but at the end of ya line when it switches up you kind of lose the sequence..
OMB I def seen you come much harder with multis than this before.. But you got him in your last few bars, although you lost the meaning within em, you were able to put together some fairly decent 4 syllable strings.
Bottom line, I think you both could of tightened it up and done better, but OMB won it off his last few bars..
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