(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210752) (please peep this)

wow! hay look homey hate to say kit but you're not quiet on MADDRAPPER'S level hey that cat multi-rhyme vocab dude anyway this was all right for a shake and bake pies !. i tneeds vocab 2. didn't rhyme enough 3. no punchlines 4. it didn't hold th eaudience interest

bu tkeep dropping i know you will improve keep up the good work