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Originally Posted by Vaskez
yeah good point, I'ma make it flow nicer next time
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Word, make it look real pretty or people won't vote for you, lol.
A Alias Or A Waste of Space? I Couldn't Tell; Flames? Musta Held 'em Back And Fled
I'll Assure This: Destroy U With This "Key" And " Push U Under The Welcome Mat" Instead
As played as "key" wordplay is, I got a feeling that this bar could've connected. Just wasn't worded right, and that results in a good ol' "wtf?".
vs.
Girls, screwing ugly losers should be a crime, resulting in punishments galore
And I guess the government agrees cos doing fraud's punishable by law
A little stretched here, first line could've been shortened without effecting the bar. I've used the "fraud" play before, but it doesn't really matter considering you actually came with a decent punch.
V// Vaskez