ok typing as I listen.......def liking the rhyme scheme u opened wit....u coming wit way more multies..u usally be on sum 1 syllable shit....lyrically is was ah'ight.....the "poking at the fat gurl theme" topic...is actually a heavily...overdone way of tyring to be comical in a track.......I got exactly what u was saying but I didn't really find it funny....hook was koo....wasn't spectacular but it followed the melody of the beat pretty good.....the flow of ya verses was the higlight of the track....I was impressed with ya flow......beat choice was smart.....but I aint really find it funny.....rosey odonnell jokes?...come on son....potbelly jokes?..come on son.....its overall creativity was subpar IMO cuz I am comparing it to shit u have done in the past...this is below ya usual level of creativity but above your usual style of rapping.....so u took 2 steps forward an 1 back....gotta keep the forward momentum playa....but aside from things I disliked....solid drop...stay up ...........1

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