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Old 10-06-05, 05:34 PM   #8
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ok i heard your old version of it so i hope this one is better

well i never left feed on your other one so i'll leave feed now.



beat is definitely hyped. really a club track. good choice.


lyrics - pretty good but im tired of hearing about all this gun talk. so to me its kinda boring. lyrically nothing special. it was good but nothing stood out.

flow - rode the beat good. kinda simple but it worked so good job with that. didnt hear you slip once. so thats good.

mic prescence - definitely good. your voice sounds original thats good.

chorus - kinda gay. NIIIGA.


i hate the end with the "Kon is back". that suck. i think it threw off the song.



overall pretty good song. definitely a good club track though.

leave some feed on the new track in my sig
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