Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Bitch ass nigga dont know who he is
Wtf is this white ass crack doin in the rap biz?
^No punch, kinda childish...3/10^
I choke your ass up and take your money.
Last night I had your girl and she was callin me honey.
^played concept, no punch 0/10^
Cuz Mike i know who you really be.
Your a gay ass homo thats all to me
^nice personal..u used his name..not! 0/10^
B no hard feelings man.
I know you do what you can.
^feeling sympathetic? fuck outa hear 0/10^
But in this case your best aint good enough.
Cuz My rhymes are like shattered glass...real rough.
^oh shit nice reference....not! 0/10^
Damn nigga your rhymes cant touch me.
Cuz im like ali floatin like a butterfly stinging your ass like a bee.
^oh nice, stealin ali's quote..and you worded it weak as fuck 0/10 ^

overall man you need tons of elevation!!! and ur vocab ur punches ur personals really need to be upped...u had no good concepts or wordplay...just plain jibber jabber.....2/10


do you know what a punch is, no1 can see any type of diss
idk who your tryin to play cuz we all know who tha real batman is*
^right, thanks for tellin me...no punch 3/10^
itz pathetic that your close to losin to Big_O**
your sorry, and know you cant beat me JOE!!***
^No personal, oh shit u used his name...2/10^
idk why you keep sayin nigga, bitch your white****
come on,your a newb and you know im right
^so wut...no punch....and ur a newbie also 0/10^
look theres batman! i jus found robin
hes tha one in batmans pants with his head bobbin
^lol nice punch....kinda fucked.....but oh well 4/10^
your name should be tha joker cuz your rymes make everyone laugh
i got the whole rappin package,but you bitch ass barely has half
^nothing there.....dont know wut to say 0/10^
say tha wrong shit and get cut, callin you two face
batman says hes returns but never began,jus like mase*****
^nope, so bad lol..0/10^

overall...kinda weak man..ive seen better....and its annoying that u half to explain everyfucking thing....so bad...u should word ur verses better and make them more easier to put together...overall 4/10

v/tha 1 n onlii b

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