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...Belong...
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Voted For: sabotage
Drakel Verse
sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim
so im destroying his record, using his own name against him
^ setup was good...but punch lacked IMO
shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done
im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one
^ Basic rhyme...self glorified...not feelin it really
hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose
so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news
^ lol @ vamoose...ok rhyme as well...ok bar
sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot
shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british
^ rhyme was a bit meh...sees 'ell lol e say hell to fam lol
this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop
the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops
^ bar off point started but setup went off
zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd
text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds]
^ closer again is off point...
Overall
Not a decent verse it was to me an under average written...lotta self-g bars went off point in places...rhyme in one bar was weak rest was average/bsaic...coulda done better IMO
Sabotage aka Implicit verse
The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
YUK...bar woulda been good 6 years ago lol
All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something
Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping"
^ no diss...at all...weak bar
Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent
Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur)
^ lol good personal liked this one
Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors
Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada)
^ lol again aight personal
We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz
And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula)
^ ok...dracula flip...hmm aight diss
Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread
^ lol nice closer Q shit gettin played but lol @ this
Overall
Better verse more bars were better...some aight personals too...jus put explinations at the bottom not in the verse next time though coz ish fucks the verse layout...
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Sabotage aka Implicit
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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