The intro - damn son, lol, you need a burger. 98lb weakling status, lol. Intro worked well.

the beat I like. The first verse, the flow it good enough for the most part. Real honest and for the most part pseudo-humerous. LOL @ at the fat chick. The first verse is dope son.

Apparantly you're coming at some one who played you, but this shit's pretty funny all around. The Two A's line is hillarious. Second half before the second hook was too open and wasn't doing anything. The song serves it's purpose, I woulda looped the hook one more time after it on the last bit to make it sound a lil more complete, but it's pretty much a done deal. All in all a good song that needs some polish to make it more listenable, but it's still good at what it's meant for - shittin on people. 1

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