.:Certified Mystique:.
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This was feedback posted for Big Jay R
IP:
What The fucks Up With this Guy I Never Heard Of Him Before
He Settin Up Battles he'll Never Win like Money Goin To A Whore
^^whack,bad opener...not feelin it at all
Why Should I Even Say Anymore Im Droppin My Weakest On J.R
Plus This Guy Has More Fruity Punchez Than A Voilent Gay Bar
^^not feelin it,iight attempt at a punch but didnt connect,whack
No Personals on This Guy and Low Level Punchez Yet Im Winnin
They Gonna Call This Guy Geovoni The Way I Left Him Spinnin
^^how can you say your winnin when nobody voted b4 you dropped?...wasnt feelin this at all...bad once again
You say you role with t town but they call me the don.
Look at you with your whack ass nike's and your fake sean john.
^^whack as fuck...dont say this ever again
Cuz im Kickin your ass and takin your bitches number.
Nigga your raps are boring they put people in deep slumber.*
^^feelin it,nice vocab mixed with a jab,first line was played though
You think your gonna rip my ass.
Fuckin homo Ill deffinately pass.
^^childish,whack,NO!
Ill fuckin cap you 4 times with a 12 gauge.
Bitch ass nigga cant even act his fucking age.
^^wherez tha punch?...nope,not gon work
Cuz my rhymes are electric Making dead bodies move like frankenstein
Man you should just stop righting cuzs my time to shine.
^^liked tha first line but 2nd line blew monkey balls
Do you really think your Satan's Spawn?
In that case the apocolypse well never see dawn.
^^lovin tha vocab and i think it was a more of a jab than a punch,nice
Cuz your rhymes are all based on what you imitate.
Ill kill your ass..youll be standin at tha pearly gate.
^^iight punch,pretty good
Damn i cant believe you think your the adversary
Cuz your you cant rap Your verses put people in a torpor.**
People askin wtf is this nigga on stage for?
^^last line was bad...other 2 were nice and i like tha vocab
iight lemme break it down...satans spawn,not a great verse,you can do better,get better vocab...no hate though,we still fam
Big Jay R...i felt that you started out weaker than weak but i like that you came back stronger and stronger...i loved tha vocab...your iight but still need a lot of elevation
NICE JOB BOTH OF YOU...KEEP AT IT AND JUS ELEVATE..SATANS SPAWN IVE SEEN BETTER...JUS KEEP WORKIN ON IT BOTH OF YOU...HIT ME BAK
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