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Old 10-07-05, 05:14 PM   #15
~Lady Fiya~
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hook is pretty catchy... i like the intro, i like the lyricism, pretty straight.. this beat all catchy and shit. your delivery pretty good on the first verse, it's decent on the second verse. the hook was made just right. Nice concept, something you can def bob your head to... i like the whispering but at one point it sounds like the whispering is off, like speeds up or something. lol.

but nice track.. stay up.
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