Listening...

I don't like the beat...

First Verse- Flow was choppy at the start...vocals are really loud over the beat...quality is good...delivery was coo...straight verse...

Hook- Wow...you can most definetly sing...some nice R and B shit...word...

Second Verse- Flow is choppy...quality is decent, nothin special...lyrics were coo...delivery was lacking...marriage proposal..? Haha...nice...decent, just work on ya flow..

Gawd damn that hook...

Third Verse- More singing...dope...rap comes in...nice flow...good quality...but damn...your singin is dope...go do some American Idol shit and win.

Overall...decent track...Implicit stole the show though...

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