I like the beat, there's so much you can do with it even tho it's real simple...

Verse-
I'm feeling the fact that you got out that range of basic lyrics, you added some multis (towards the end of the 1st verse)...

the Chorus, i actually am feeling.. your delivery is nice for hooks, i'm feeling your emotion mos definately.

Verse-
Your flow is pretty repetitive, like it sound like you keep the exact same pattern the whole entire time, so that's a bad thing... i like the concept of the song, kinda like "a song of strength".. You just have to switch up your flow some, be a little more risky with your lyrics..

Don't do this the entire time..
Blah blah blah blah bam
blah blah blah blah dam
^^instead of this simple scheme

Try:
blada blada bam
blah blah blah blah dam

^^If you do that, make sure you mix it up.. but experiment on trying different flows, you can keep the one you have but spice it up.. make it unpredictable.
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