I like the intro...

LOL @ how it starts off like a story... "obese fat piece of meat* ROFL! I like the first verse best, flow-wise and lyrically. I love this beat... the hook is tight for a diss, aight second verse, you said stuff that we wouldn't know unless we knew the chick/asian.. but overall the jokes were kinda funny and the.... haha @ 2A line haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lmfao! you bogus haha. Your flow is getting better every track, keep it consistent and yo' I'm feelin the multis, you def improving... keep up the work.

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