your flow is hot on this, emotion, dubs/adlibs, and delivery all good for this type of track.. i like the versatility of your flow on the beat (the better way to put it)... feeling the etcha sketch line and fisher price typewriter line.. uh oh, internals and multis, k time for chorus - catchy, very catchy... damn you soooo far from monotone on the second verse it's crazy, you overcame every claim against you. Your mom is proud. Yes, I am. lol @ how you say bitch... Don't be taking my shining word emphasis lol!!! "Bitch..." For real tho, it's a nice track overall.

Pretty good. Keep up tha work........
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