Voted For: V.i.P

its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay
or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday
2..meh..seems more like a threat than a punch
its to late, crushing bones and all like a dog with an toothe ache
so C safe, cuz the bars'll clean out ya mouth like if it was toothepaste
3...borderline self glorifing
and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10
and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend
4...decent enuff...
so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving
so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments
5....ok......

God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch
Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit
1....set-up suked cos gay is played..and u just complimented him.
I'ma smash this Fake before all the rumors get around
Liar....when's the last time herbs got in the VIP lounge
3....decent concept..worded badly.
Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel
If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people
5....nice.
I woulda dropped better, but it woulda been a waste
N giving Grace to God won't help, you'll still b a Dis-Grace
2.....played.

Ok..pretty close battle..
VIP...
Make ur lines shorter.Ur flow is bad.U started off weak..as ur 1st bar seemed to be a threat and 2nd bar was SH.But you picked shit up near the end.
Solitude...
Ur 1st bar was horrible.U had a gay line..and then u complimented him.U said that he's the shit...and that is a term people use to say someone's good.I know what ur trying to say and all,that he's shit...but man..you worded it completly wrong.

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